![]() ![]() ![]() Let's try this: My image is reflected by the mirror, and I see it in the mirror. I feel like it could be either: 'Much like the salty air, he cuts into my flesh, a memory of that inscribed in black ink.' OR 'Much like the salty air he cuts into my flesh, a memory of that inscribed in black ink.' Thanks in advance! 'Much like the salty air, he cuts into my flesh a memory of that inscribed in black ink.' I'm unsure whether this is right or not. Off topic: I was also wondering if someone could help me out with the punctuation in this sentance. In this instance, I think either or works, but "in" probably makes more sense, in the sense that the light reflects the hope within the speaker. Thank you for your replies :) I think that IMcRout's definition of "reflected in" suits the metaphorical statement which I'm making in the poem, but KerryP, you are totally right, it's very confusing and without question open to a lot of interpetation. ![]()
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